In with the in crowd

 

Here I am at a coffee shop in L.A. It's just as i had imagined, having a toasted sesame-seed bagel, no butter, and tea, editing my book, surrounded by others writing, mostly screenplays judging by the conversations, but who knows? What I didn't imagine was how uncomfortable the chairs would be. I've been here an hour and I'm ready to bolt. Not only that, the loud-talkers at the next table . . . I can't tune them out. I am not impressed with the name-dropping. Or, maybe I am, which annoys me more than the decibels. I leave, write this in-the-moment moment back at the room. I'm used to country-quiet and my own company. I thought I would enjoy this, thought it might boost my creativity. It's wonderful in its own way, but no. I'll ride to the beach in a while, watch the surfers, the gulls, or close my eyes, think thoughts, listen.

 

 

 

 

2014

Dobie Gray

 

 

 

 

 





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Written on 2025-10-11 at 14:34

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William Hughes The PoetBay support member heart!
I used to think happiness was a Place. But then I read T. S. Eliot:
“We shall not cease from exploration
And the end of all our exploring
Will be to arrive where we started
And know the place for the first time...''

The Place for me is my childhood home. I lived in NYC for years and all the decibels so aptly referred to in this cool poem were deafening my senses. Thanks for posting.
2025-10-11