Leah had more Jesus in her
than a million fundygelicals
with their shrill white salvation.
Oh my, she sounds like a treat! ;) "Fundygelicals" is good one, too. This little poem conjures such an impactful portrait of Leah, it's impressive in a lasting way. Always enjoy the effect of your words, merci.
Fundygelicals? Fundamentalist evangelicals? Nice word!
I also like "shrill white salvation" for its sonic effects!