i am lynn


the quiet one

morning suits me


time to listen   

emily   time to read   

my girl rosalia

maybe write   then

she stirs

i hear her thinking


i begin to unravel

my cocoon of quiet

begin to remake myself

as one of two 




emily remler

rosalia de castro







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Written on 2022-04-30 at 03:04

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Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
This poem may be small, It speaks volumes to me. Often I self reflect in the quietness of dawn's early light. Loved it, Plus if I thought of a coffee would you make me one too?
Many regards Alan

So, Lynn enjoys the music and the poetry. Lucky Lynne. Mornings in my house are the best time, before the cocophany when everyone wakes up . I have learned to flow, absorb, detatch....write it out...

Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Worthy of some kind of accolade, this poem resonates with me very much. It takes a great deal of skill to impart so much information, so many mental pictures and feelings, with so few words.

Uncle Meridian The PoetBay support member heart!
Superlative. These short lines are tentative and questing, like the grey light before dawn. There's something wonderfully fresh and new about the diction, the tenor of the poem. Something tender and surprising.