July 28th,2022

A strange day
packed with longing
immense longing
which at one point of time
looked like
would engulf me completely
and it did for a few moments
making me succumb to it
to this deep longing
within me
which makes me sad and happy
at the same time.
Sad that i feel
happy that i feel.

Poetry by Sona The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2022-07-28 at 21:23

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I love the last two lines. You've written about longing well.

Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Yes, being aware of feelings, valuing them and going with their vibes, is often most rewarding. A good write.