Could do better
Art in all its forms should make you think,Move you, inspire you, and bring you joy,
Some poetry lacks input, lacks a meaning,
If all you have to say is the beauty of a flower,
Or the joy of a new born baby’s face,
And the love of your life,
Then move on,
You are not making a point,
You are not breaking new ground,
You are not asking your reader to form an opinion,
Yes, it may be well intended,
It may well give you pleasure to write,
But as a reader I’ve seen it all before.
Poetry by JohnJohn
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Written on 2023-03-08 at 13:04
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