do you remember lucerne as i do

putting francs

into the meter for hot water


sitting by the lake


what was it we were reading   


do you remember the waiter's


of disdain   who knew a nose could be so long


but   rightly so   offending sensibilities

as we were

left and right   do you remember it 


as i do   as lovely   as enchanting   or   is it you

i am remembering



Poetry by one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2023-05-08 at 02:24

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Sona The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful!I am so full of curiosity at the imagery you have drawn and it sewems to me as if the whole city is enveloped in the mist of your remembering.

Uncle Meridian The PoetBay support member heart!
I enjoyed this poem, its seemingly casual accuracy, its open-hearted fidelity to a particular moment, to a particular person. A memorandum of what deserves to be remembered!