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My Little Green Lamp

My little green lamp
is shining dark as ever tonight
bringing death to all colours
scaring away the light

A peculiar thing it is
this little lamp of mine.
It is found sickening by most,
but I find it fine

Its greenish light
makes the world go numb.
And my heart goes deaf
as the night goes dumb




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Written on 2005-08-20 at 10:51

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lou bergs
We're always nice ;).
I like this alot. The shape of it is, and this is not a bad thing of course, regular. And the content of this poem isn't that regular adn that creates a great contradiction within the text somehow. Eh, yeah.
Anyway, like it a lot.

Theo
2005-08-20



Guess anybody could need a lamp like that sometimes...
Welcome with your first text!
2005-08-20


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
arr yes, those green bulbs are not very brigt, had some in the past, it's hard trying to find things in such light. nice poem.
2005-08-20