three lines

 

watering the garden

   one day closer to rain

summer drought

 

 

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Poetry by jim The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2023-07-05 at 21:49

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Ann Wood The PoetBay support member heart!
Nice poem Jim, thank you for sharing it with us.
2023-07-15


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
It is very humid here currently, I like summer, there is something very languid in these lines, that summer heat and watering at dusk
2023-07-07


Uncle Meridian The PoetBay support member heart!
I misread "rain" as "ruin" at first. Shows my optimistic cast of mind these days!

Excellent poem.
2023-07-06