tanka

 

withering, falling

summer's orange now winter's bruise

frost-nipped persimmons

 

oh so sweet, a bushel now

portends a cold night's pudding 

 

 

 





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Written on 2023-11-16 at 17:25

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Anna Banasiak
beautiful, amazing imagery!I love it!
2023-11-17



excellent!
2023-11-16


D G Moody The PoetBay support member heart!
Such a lovely poem, and I thought it captured winters comfort. perfectly.

However.........a small error: eight syllables on the second line, if we take summers as two.
2023-11-16


Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
Softly amazing!
2023-11-16