Writing tanka

Really like writing tanka,
No two are the same.
Like the way the water falls,
One drop at a time.
In a spiral river rain.



Poetry by Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2023-11-21 at 02:25

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D G Moody The PoetBay support member heart!
A delightful poem. I liked the rhyme on the second and fifth lines, and the suggested rhyme on one and four. It gives to my ear a nice sound.
2023-11-21


Uncle Meridian The PoetBay support member heart!
I echo Sameen. This is perfectly admirable!
2023-11-21


Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
Another great one!
2023-11-21