Daybreaker
Unfortunately I think you're right. The world spins faster and faster.

But the persons who doesn't see the observer and thinker are probably not that interesting anyway.

well captured.
2006-07-31

Halloway
Sometimes, I feel the same
This text really talks to me,
It's saying something, and is really waking up something inside me
'cause I know how it feels
I hope, you'll be seen soon
(But you have already been, by me)
2006-07-01

Zoya Zaidi
Don't be so disheartened,
My dear Mist,
Remeber:
It is also the slow and steady who win th race!
Your day will come, my dear friend!

**Hugs**
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-07-01

lastromantichero
Hey Mr Mist

All the chics will be after you once they read this you are a true romantic like me i have made an art form of unrequited love lololololol but keep your chin up young sir

and read the story about Kaw Liga the wooden store Indian who loved an indian maid but couldnt tell her so lost her.

if you love someone tell her how you feel

it might not win her hand

but it is a nice feeling to feel that strong about some one so beautiful wll done on the poem and i am sure she knows after this rgds mike
2006-07-01

liz munro
I agree with Kathy -
after the shit i've gone through
a nice guy [like you] would finsh first.

this is a sad poem but it makes you think
which is what makes it a great poem.

liz.
2006-07-01

Kathy Lockhart
Well for this woman a Nice Guy would finish first! Quietness, Gentleness, Kindness, Thoughtfulness, Lovliness are all qualities I am looking for in a man. But you are just too darn young!!! You expressed yourself very well and related your thoughts poetically. :) kathy
2006-07-01