sedona arizona

4/2/24




summit

 

ask the cold wind

to carry away

troubling thoughts

 

and the sun

to replenish the spirit

 

~

 

asking the cold wind

to carry away 

my troubling thoughts 

 

and the sun

to replenish my spirit   

 

 





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Written on 2024-04-03 at 03:18

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D G Moody
Yes, the variation is intriguing - a novel and refreshing form I quite like.
2024-04-04


Uncle Meridian The PoetBay support member heart!
Yes. I think I might try something similar. Bravo on both variations!
2024-04-03