Apprehension

She catches him up and tells him how much
they all miss that laconic delivery,
enthusing about the open mic
at the Abbey Café of a Thursday.

He remembers clambering up on stage
too early, too late, the night hanging on
how loud the crowd was applauding,
or lighting turned down like a thumb.

That utterance of himself being heard,
a piano stuttering down terrace steps;
his mouth dried up and a sideways look
at the bar so reflective and wet.

She says they’ve started serving beer
and the venue is small and intimate;
the iambic rise and fall of her breasts
is blinding him to their pointlessness.




Poetry by Ray Miller
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Written on 2025-11-21 at 10:08

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Ray Miller
Thankyou.
2025-11-24


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2025-11-24


Ray Miller
Thanks, you sum it up well.
2025-11-23


arquious The PoetBay support member heart!
I feel a fragile tension, the thrill of applause and the dryness of stage fright, not to leave out the inescapable lure of nostalgia. The closing image can be a reminder of how easily memory and desire blur into a futility that results in a strangely vibrant albeit pointless act of expression.
2025-11-22