Thinking back on my life in this one. Again. I guess it comes with aging. Or maybe I’m just ready for spring.


Inevitably Evident

Aging has been defined
as a slow march to death;
but that phrase misses the mark,
understates the extraordinary effort
expended in living.

More descriptive would be
to compare our lives
to a race, not a march.
Time does not pass
with steadiness
nor is it cadenced.
At times it seems to stand still,
caught up in heartache,
we can be prisoners of the past,
paused in its grip.

Then there are the surges
when time accelerates -
children growing up,
jobs demanding our focus,
friendships and fellowship,
squeezing ourselves to fit
into all the different compartments
needing our moments.

Some live until the last breath.
Whether emboldened
by the inevitable end
or sheltered by denial,
they move forward steadily
until the parade’s end.

But others of us -
children now grown,
parents now gone,
friends passing on,
our bodies slowing -
begin to measure our steps.

We have survived the traumas,
embraced the joys,
carried the weight
and the wonder.

Now we find comfort in stillness,
in quieter mornings,
in sunsets peacefully watched,
in night skies filled with stars.

This is not surrender,
but recognition, and acceptance.

The evidence inevitable:
we have lived.




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Written on 2026-02-13 at 02:48

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Kee Zealy The PoetBay support member heart!
The evidence of existence is stories passed to our descendants, passions shared, pain expressed, compassion communicated, mentoring applied and love shared with all those matter. With that part of existence I believe we are at peace. There is peace in knowing that.
2026-02-13


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
This poem really does deserve accolade! It is a well executed precise about time and ageing which other 'matures' will concur with by the bucket load!
There will be variations of course: Mine for example because I feel that I am still in the process of carrying 'the weight', and whilst I delight in those moments of communion with the Universe (in all its magnificence and beauty) there are fewer such moments than I would like. But as the poem says, they are there to comfort us - and, I feel, recharge us too.
Blessings, Allen
2026-02-13