A poem for one of my granddaughters. I wrote this after watching a video of her dancing. It was just magical to watch her movements.


Through My Eyes

As an infant, she wailed
against the world,
demanding attention,
rejecting our attempts to soothe.
I watched her determination,
already knowing
how brave she would be.

As a toddler, she ran
on muscled legs,
strong for one so small,
independent already.
I watched her steps,
recognizing her persistence
would serve her well.

As a child, she created
through writing and art,
an eye for color,
a teller of stories.
I marveled at her imagination,
knowing her visions were
the seeds of her dreams.

As she grew, she began to play,
first the piano, then the violin,
raised in a home filled with music,
the constant to every change.
I listened, over and over,
awed by her patient insistence
on getting the notes just right.

Now a teen, she dances,
pouring her soul into movement,
her body telling the story
of her life - her love for life.
I watch her becoming,
fluid and radiant,
capturing us all with her joy.
My heart expands
with every turn she takes.




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Written on 2026-02-25 at 19:59

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Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi Melinda
A warm welcome from cloudy Eastbourne,
For giving me the opportunity to read.
Your excellent poetry. Your eyes
Must be a wonderful world to live in.
Hugs and kisses
Regards Alan
2026-02-27


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful. It is nice to 'see' and read. It happens too with your own children. I've learned not to second guess where it will all lead. My dancer has become a healer, my DIY assistant a marketing guru. Blessings, Allen
2026-02-26