My life falling apart sorry I'm just back


Devils blood

It feels all I try to do is tearing me apart.i try to be good .
But I was born bad ,The devil comes to me to show me .no matter in my life .darkness .pain. anger and fear.
I'm not wanting to live this life .
I can cut myself to make the pain go away .
But the devil says its the only way .I pay him each day with my blood. To show him he has me in every way .......




Poetry by dee quirke
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Written on 2026-04-22 at 18:39

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Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi dee
Sorry you feel that way I must confess,
I feel depressed everyday. So I sort of know
what your going through. I can feel the pain
in each word you've written, I agree with Ken.
You sound as though you have a lovely soul,
Don't believe you are bad in anyway, stop
listening to those thoughts that tell you that you are.
Their not what your God would want you to do.
Take care of yourself dee and know you have
found friends here on poetbay.
Regards Alan
2026-04-27


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2026-04-27


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
THEAR IS NO BAD
In the chrater in
This work, just some
One needing understanding
And of support of those who care!
Kenny D.
2026-04-23