My father's skills gave him 'preferred occupation' status during WWII. This meant he worked making weapons instead of fighting.  It was dangerous and ultimately life-threatening work.




CONSUMMATION'S COLOURS

 

 

Strands of golden web abound,
and silver ties here with there.
There is a settling of old bones –
yet not as old as might have been;
the days, scythed away, silently.


The rouge has drained from the skin;
has dripped relentlessly
from the open wound of disease.
And even though this blight was there
the spirit still maintained your life.


Now, pallid grey-blue’ish tones
suck my eyes to see him –
He with his lowered jaw, and lids,
and I see the face of the Christ
hung from the cross… elongated.


Violet heralds the advent
of his life’s certain moment –
and though I do not want its touch
to come upon my dying dad,
I wish it not to more delay.


The cold blue mist of silence
descends on the Friday ward.
The air is stilled and dust motes stay
suspended, as is life itself.
Now his occult breath is easy.


Colours mist my tearful eyes –
selfish tears of my sorrow
for too much time spent divided;
not wept for him who gave me life –
he is beyond the need of them.


Britain never gave him gold
for inhaling it’s wartime dust –
making weapons for the devil.
No medal to pin on his chest –
there is…
…just the touch of my pale-pink hand.

 

 


© Griffonner 2026





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Written on 2026-05-09 at 10:54

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jim The PoetBay support member heart!
I cannot help but think this poem could not have been written at any point in your life until now—the craft you've honed over a lifetime of writing seems to have come together in this stunningly poignant and reflective poem.
2026-05-09


Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
Your words are holy holy holy
2026-05-09


Melinda K Zarate The PoetBay support member heart!
This poem really touched me and reminded me of when I sat with my mom in Hospice. It’s a kind of waiting where you know the ending and also when your relationship with the person in the bed was somewhat, or more than somewhat, difficult. Your poem captures those solemn moments very vividly, especially with the colors.

Sincerely.
Melinda
2026-05-09