Fellow Poets of Poetbay
Your verses are much too libre.For poetry can be such fun
If you use meter, rhymes and turns
To play with structure, rather than
To let words run without a plan.
I’m not saying give up free verse.
Look not to me like I’m a hearse.
Your bubbles I don’t mean to burst.
Just hear me out. Keep your lips pursed.
I’m just saying, write a sonnet
Once in a while. Get up on it.
Twist your lines into villanelles.
A triolet would suit you well.
A haiku, tanka, or ghazal
Could inspire. Form’s not a muzzle.
Free verse is good and can be great
But most use it as default state
And cease to grow. In fact, refuse.
Thus their poems become refuse.
Make your poems sing! Not exhale.
Meals cooked the same quickly turn stale.
Poetry by Sameen
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Written on 2026-05-25 at 05:32
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