Prompt: “If you could give an acceptance speech for any superlative award, what would the award be and what would you say?” For reference, in American high school yearbooks, “superlatives” are designations such as “Most likely to succeed.”


Superlative

The award is darkly tarnished,
accepted with a trembling hand,
the size of her knuckles
revealing, like rings in a tree,
the years it took to qualify.

Uncertainty and fear of failure
shaped the hands
that were once soft and supple;
holding the hands of her children
steadied her from falling.

The hands of another
chipped away at her essence;
but still she stood.

When finally the storm moved on,
she stood alone in the forest,
the sunlight of her freedom
blinding her before
stirring her back into being.

The award is this:
Most likely to survive.




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Written on 2026-06-11 at 20:41

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Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
A wonderful poem that travels through blood to reach that amazing ending
2026-06-12


jim The PoetBay support member heart!
Your poems exhibit such honesty—this one, and all your poems. I mean this as a compliment, it's rare to read such direct thought-to-words poems, it's makes the reading very personal, very real.

I'm not saying this very well! I like your style!

jim
2026-06-12


Kee Zealy The PoetBay support member heart!
And survived most excellentlly.
2026-06-12