Sameen
This is tender and full of quiet awe. The idea of someone arriving fully formed yet still felt as a miracle is lovely, and the shift from explaining Lin's arrival to simply marveling at her presence gives the poem a warm, settled feeling. The phrase "the state of grace bestowed upon us" carries real weight. But the poem is almost too content. There's no friction or surprise, just gratitude repeated in slightly different ways. A single sharp detail about Lin herself would make the wonder feel more personal and less abstract. Still, the love here is unmistakable.
2026-08-25

Jamsbo Rockda
Wonderful people come into our lives. We are blessed and bettered by their presence.
2026-08-14

Griffonner
I have a Lin too, thought she hates the abbreviation. Your Lin is perfect, beyond time even, and always will be. You are so fortunate indeed. Blessings, Allen
2026-08-13

Sona
oh yes! she is beautiful
2026-08-13