four fingers


you
never ask
never

you
but the birth
the breath

and four fingers
from

retires into
one screaming
cell

the thousandth
and

silent shell
shatters


into
one
eye





Poetry by 5072
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Written on 2005-08-27 at 12:53

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epohonci
disjointed, yes, but perhaps because it's meant to be that way. (that's what i got from the read anyhow)
2005-08-27


Amberlee Carter
hmm, there is something about this piece that makes it compelling...but I can't say what...it reads disjointed that it's hard to make sense of, and yet, it seems to work somehow...i'll have to come back to this one..keep writing.
Always,
Amberlee
2005-08-27