Okay, this text does nooot seem to good, cause, well, I'm norwegian, and it was written in norwegian and then I tried to translate the best I could, so if you see any wrongwritten words or any things that should be fixed, please let me know...

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Falling angel

" Fearless, greeting, dancing against fresh air "

Little anglefeet dancing lightly on the edges
The sun comes over the clouds and illuminate it all

" The little angel danced on light feet with smiles and piruets "

Little hands letting go and stretching towards the sky
The cloudless sky removes all doubts

" Tip and tapping against the world, welcoming it with open arms "

Little eyes shines smiling to the snow
Dancing down on rosered cheeks

" Smiles fade away as little feet let go, silently dancing through the air "

Falling, flying, hopeful though knowing
Peaceful, her open eyes of trust closes now

" For a moment the world stops and the dancing little angel can no longer smile "

Sounds of running footsteps, deafening screams
Redcolored snow, and whitepale cheeks

" With smiling eyes, and rosered cheeks the little angel stretches again "

Hopeless screams, wondering expressions
The silence of chaos within everyones eyes

" However, the little angel doesn't look back, only flyes gently up "


" Cause only the sky is the limit for dancing feet "




Poetry by MissBrokenglass
Read 645 times
Written on 2005-08-27 at 23:38

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
too tired to go through your poem and show corrections right now. a light piece.
2005-08-28