Sometimes is the hardest thing about life, life itselves


Solitude

In solitude
I will live my life
far away from the sun

From the deep
dark
ocean inside me
the waves has just begun

In silent vanquish
I live my life
the candles burning weak in my soul

Conscience fading
what will I ever be worth
I was never meant to be hole.





Poetry by Evelyn
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Written on 2006-08-06 at 19:44

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Aashish Thakur
in solitude we learn the lesson of friendship and humanity. good poem
2006-08-10


Zachary P. B.
in solitude we torture ourselves... the worse treatment we could ever have is within ourselves... so sad, but true.

and yes, you will be whole someday. just believe. =)

z
2006-08-09


Evelyn
Some people give up in the end...thank you for your comment:)
2006-08-06


Troll
the first stanza is probably my favorite... just the idea of living your life far away from the sun... the thing that strikes me most though, is that it's almost a willful decision... a means of self abuse even...
2006-08-06