your thoughts about this one?*


A tale begun

Deep tones being tossed out
From the hole of eternity

The darkness of the night is no longer what it used to be
With its crescendo of sound

Flames reaching towards the sky
An inferno of light

The learned ones say the end is near
The end of the world laughs

Please flush it all away
See the ground give way

It will be a tale just begun



Poetry by Evelyn
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Written on 2006-08-18 at 18:01

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Lourdes
is eternity a hole? how do you know that? what if it is a spiral? Eternity is a name for something humans don't have a name for , and I find it very innovative and courageous of you to call it a hole . I like your thoughts little one , never let them corrupt you .
2006-10-31


Rob Graber
Neat images, with paradoxical title and ending: ending as beginning!
2006-08-18