Acrostics



Never is a promise

 

 

Cold September

And

Never is a promise you say

 

 
Tears leave burnmarks

Ending where your words begin

A child is gone

Resting in

Silent memories

 

Down from the

Rooftop of my soul

Opal shaped rain falls softly

Wanting a home only but

Never is a promise you say

 

Tumbling through seasons

Hand in face

Ending transparent in

 

Winter

Opal shaped rain falling softly

Returning as white

Laments of my

Deep grief





Poetry by Emelén The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-08-10 at 16:25

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frig
wow, this is beautiful!
2006-09-11


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
sorrow expressed so beautifully... superb imagery in this... "Tumbling through seasons Hand in face Ending transparent in Winter" - is one of the passages that stands out for me... well, all of it is excellent, id copy-paste all the lines really ;) ... refreshing style you have, i enjoyed very much... thanks for sharing :f xx
2006-08-15


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a very clever poem young lady you are very succinct wit h these acrostics well done rgds mike
2006-08-10


Kathy Lockhart
this is a beautiful poem and then to be Acrostic is brilliant. What a Write, Girl!!! kathy
2006-08-10