I am going camping today with my mom, how I adore the water!


Peaceful water

The peaceful water

At the very break of dawn

It enchants my soul



Haiku by Teala
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Written on 2006-08-11 at 19:24

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I really like reading this + i learned the word "enchant". Thank you.
2006-08-20



wowwwww!!!! I love this! great write..I love water too!!!!!kissess
2006-08-12


keith nunes
lovely
2006-08-11


Zachary P. B.
Wonderful write friend

I really enjoyed this piece

Thanks for the image =)

loved this!

z
2006-08-11


Dan Cederholm
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Hey there Teala wat a great HAIKU here!

It is realy perfect . . .

And what a lovely melodi in it!

BRAVO!!!

Regards Dan

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2006-08-11


Will
Enjoy
2006-08-11


Troll
enchanting, as is the water at dawn... keep it up!
2006-08-11


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
I love this poem!
I wish I could follow along :D but oh well I will take a bath instead and imagine that the moon is shining on me!

Although an enchanting moment to swim at the very break of dawn,but I simply refuse to wake up sooo early :p
2006-08-11



These three lines enchant mine!
2006-08-11