just about some feelings I have had inside of me.. good to get it on the paper! =)


By yourself?

you're sitting all alone,
weakness aching in every bone.
trying to find a meaning,
wishing you were only dreaming..

but it's not as easy as it seems,
giving up hundred of dreams.
whishing to be the best!
or atleast a bit like all the rest..

they nag you with anger,
seeing you as a stranger.
you wish you could cope,
but you feel, there is no hope

why live alone in anxiety,
wishing, you just could flee?
with feelings all dark,
you couldn't live with THE mark.

of loneliness all over the place,
wishing someone could have the strength to face,
you, in your eternal darkness.
you wish for forgiveness.
but why don't you seek for a place to be,
where absolutely no one can make you flee,
and you alone can see,
if you were just a bit more free,
it could have been..
you, and me...



Poetry by theshadowangel
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Written on 2005-08-30 at 20:24

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
hundred of dreams - hundred dreams

atleast - at least

i would not capitilise the here.

lonelyness - loneliness

noone - no one

aye it is good to get the feelings onto paper, a good poem, just needs a little tidying up.
2005-08-30