i wrote this poem when i was just 10 ,this is my second poem you 'll find it interesting and also stupid


Alone

Alone
I am alone,
Every body have gone
I am feeling scary and eating a red berry
While reading a book
I had to look
At the door
But nobody comes
Except the voice of bombs
But suddenly the bell ring ding-dong
I saw my cousins at the door singing my birthday song.




Poetry by dija
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Written on 2006-08-14 at 22:04

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Amanda K
it was a good shot at such an age. i really enjoyed its melody.

all the best on 2007,
2007-01-06


tamar
Your poem is full of your innocence - and your pure heart- however the contents are alarming to hear the sounds of bombing at such a young age I am sure that I would not want that on anyone! Peace to you and to the world and keep up your love of poetry. Well done.
2006-09-21


Cris
A nice little poem...and yes the bombs the sound of them make me think. Sounds like that we do not have in sweden..(not yet..brr)

First alone end then a birthday song it is really good.
2006-08-19