Iceburned

Outside this darkened room
The rain is poring down

The feeling of emptiness is growing deeper

Every second lasts an eternity
Rips me apart

Leave me like a ball of sorrow
Dying in my own anxiety
Drowning in a sea of darkness
Lost hopes
You can hear my body breaking
Lost in my own cold

Iceburned




Poetry by Evelyn
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Written on 2006-08-14 at 22:46

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Zachary P. B.
fire and ice may be hell, but memories and loneliness can be worse...

wondrous emotional poem. =)

z
2006-08-15


matt
uhhh...that was good...i dont exactly feel good after reading it but i certainly feel sometihng....im sorry whatevers happened/happening im here if you need someone to talk to...oohhh good poem. melancholy, but good.
2006-08-15