Over the Sea

The mountains sings over the sea
the haze lay low

My eyes split the water
the sky reflects away

Beside you in love
the rain falls grey

Between your fingers your plaits
the embrace becomes hard

Poetry by Dilsewat
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Written on 2006-08-15 at 08:45

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Very nice and quite vivid--welcome back!

Under all the grayness and haze, there lies an undercurrent of ardent longing through this poem. In the last line, it is sparkling vividly.
It's nice to see you back on the bay!

Nice poem..
I like the sea. Soft and beautiful.