A fun haiku!


Fish Swish

Fish Swish Happily

Their scales that capture the sun

Sparkle, swim, go fast!



Haiku by Teala
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Written on 2006-08-19 at 12:08

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Saga
I can actually see the fish, i can actually see the fish shining!!!
2006-08-20


wee2souls
a fun haiku
indeed:))
loved it!!!:)))))
cindy
2006-08-19


Zachary P. B.
this makes me smile. =) even a fish can make a plain day glorious, for that one moment they reflect a heavenly light in that soothing water, a good day indeed.

loved this. =)
z
2006-08-19


Rob Graber
This "captures the sun" at least as well as fish scales! What a change of mood from the vampire wannabe of yesterday!
2006-08-19


Kathy Lockhart
Lovely, Light, Lively! Great Poetry! xx kathy
2006-08-19


Lourdes
this little great smile of an Haiku brightened my day so.
You give so much with such simplicity !
2006-08-19


Dan Cederholm
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Hi Teala this is funny and so lovely !!!

A great Haiku BRAVO!!!

Regards Dan

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2006-08-19