The burden of you

If only you could feel
how strong I am
when I think
of you

When you're gone
I collapse
under the weight
of your absence




Poetry by Jer
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Written on 2006-08-20 at 11:34

Tags Strong  Love  Absence 

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Wow sir this is a beautifu lexample of love poetry at its best i empathise with this well done rgds mike welcome here
2006-08-21



The feeling of missing a beloved one is so strongly expressed here, in just a few but well chosen words! Welcome to the Bay, Jer!
2006-08-21