Catch 22

she missed on first
like askin

are you sure on this

second hit
and sent a silent scream
deep in to eternety

darker
and later

the third




Poetry by Straycat
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Written on 2005-09-04 at 13:31

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Straycat
Thank you very much for comments to all, and sorry about my english

You my be right about Allycat. i had this out a coupple of years ago in english, but lost it like i allmost did this time. I know i have used the knick allycat allso a coupple of thimes, but cant remember on this.

anyway thanks a lot for long and fine comment, and i think i keep the meaning of this for my self for now, but Catch 22 means youre doomed if you do and your doomed if you dont. Kind of a "mission impossible"

Have a nice day!:)
2005-09-22


peanutts
catch 22, to lose, either way
2005-09-05


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
its funny but for some reason i feel ive read this before by an author that went by the name of alleycat... hm... maybe im mistaken too... not insinuating plagiarism here but wondering if youre that same author... i have one of those memories that needs a bit of guidance once in a while cause its not so certain, you know... anyway, sorry... i have a tendency to ramble when i comment... but, yeah, your poem... aside the familiarity aspect, is hard to understand for me... eech... i hate leaving comments like this cause its not meant to be hurtful you have to believe me... but i dont like to lie either... if you could explain a bit i would really appreciate your perspective... id read it again with your perspective and probably could give you a much better comment than this... i wont rate for now in case you decide to let me know... sorry again... hope youll let me know... :f

later...xx
2005-09-05


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
not sure with those first two lines. like askin?

eternety - eternity
2005-09-04