friendchip


I want to be your friend

Do you want to listen to my history and my poems?

Became my friend in god times as wll as bad times?

Wanted to walk with me in the forest picking berry?

Respeckt me and let me also decide?

Want to be with me in same condition?

Are you rady for that?

Then I whant to be your friend?





Poetry by jean-mike
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Written on 2005-09-06 at 11:41

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
friendship is important i say... the best care when its unconditional... nice poem... thanks for sharing :f

later... xx
2005-09-09


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
there are a few errors here in your translation to english.

Became - i am thinking become in the context of this line.

god times - good times.

wll - well.

Wanted to walk - this might be better if you say do you want to walk...

picking berry? - picking berries?

Respeckt - Respect.

in same - in the same.

rady - ready.

whant - want.

it is a good poem, just all the spelling etc.
2005-09-06