Oh, mother. ...




Sleep mother while I build your
underground atlantis. ...

Sleep mother. ...
Your suffering will end soon,
I can feel it. ..

Don't worry mother,
I will take care of you.

You gave birth to my existence
I now give you a breath of life
at the end of your existence.

The life that you nutrice in your body
and held in your arms,
it's my turn now mother.

Hush... Don't be afraid....
Just close your eyes and rest in my arms.
I am here for you, I am strong now,
I can protect you.

Smile mother, let's laugh together,
remember you are a warrior of the fire
as am I.

The underground atlantis
is built now.
I love you mom. ...

The stargate will open when you
say my name and I will be there for you,
you will never feel alone.

From the moment of my birth a part of me
was and always will be with you.

I am a part of you mommy...




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Written on 2006-09-03 at 00:33

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Audrey Barber
I am in the process of writing to my mum too. But then stopped to read you. You just took my senses away with this. How I long for mine. Thank you
2006-09-03


Malin Johansson
Beautiful loving poem here dear!!!
I loved this one... this one is bookmarked, because I know the feeling... always be supported and loved and it's wounderfull to be able to be supportive and loving back... Great poem here!!!
*amazed*
Hugs
2006-09-03


Dan Cederholm
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Oh this is so heartbreaking, tears in my

eyes is faling down and hit the floor!!!


The stargate is now open and Atlantis is

waiting . . .



To your Mother!

Rest in our memories and dont be afraid,

dwell in our deepest thougths, rest in

peace but stay in grace beacuse we will

newer forget your deeds and your face

Atlantis is calling, space and time is out of

order . . . Atlantis is calling!


Deep thougths and bittersweet memories

that hurts, the mirror bits in your heart

NSW are slowely passed away and your

strength grows stronger and stronger,

The sorrows we have to live with and

thats something unpleasant.

But dry your tears and go on with your life

in your very own safe place.


With love and care, hugs XXX to you / Dan

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2006-09-03


wee2souls
A very heartfelt poem
to your mother
beautiful..
hugs to you
cindy
2006-09-03


Kathy Lockhart
"The life that you nutrice in your body
and held in your arms,
it's my turn now mother.

Hash... Don't be afraid....
Just close your eyes and rest in my arms.
I am here for you, I am strong now,
I can protect you."

I know what you are feeling. You brought back bittersweet memories for me which include both the times with my daddy and my mommy. When at the end, I along with my other siblings were PRIVILEGED to take care of our parents. That time, at the end of their lives here on earth, was so special and personal. I was truly blessed beyond measure or words to care for them. Thank you so much for posting this beautiful piece Carmen. It really has touched my heart and moved me to tears of sweet memories. xxx Kathy
2006-09-03


Angel3
Excellent and beautiful poem to your mother.
Very strong and I more than like it, I love it.
2006-09-03


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
A wonderfully warm and loving sentiment. So sensitively portrayed and a real pleasure to read.
2006-09-03