technically faulty but at least somewhat honest as an effort of expression....

180. Sea of Love ( - in answer to Coolaaron's latest challenge)

It's all for you, my loved, all my sea of love
of endless care and generosity,
of all my life and its creativeness,
my whole production and all that I lived for,
all the beauty I have lived for, all my music above all.
Just take it, drown in it, protect it and enjoy it,
let my music's affluence inspire you
and match the generosity and full length of your gorgeous hair,
and be magnanimous, magnificent and magic
with the manifoldness of this sea that I bequeath you,
greater than the lands of all the earth and richer
with its endlessness of life and love
that man can never understand or fathom
except lovers of the same kind of dynamic bottomlessness
as creative freaks like you and me, both drowned in our abyss
of the ultimate perfection of the beauty of pure music
manufactured and created only out of the profoundest melody
of love that only can be found beyond the depths of all the oceans.

Poetry by Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-09-03 at 19:42

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Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
Thank you, Troll! I thoroughly enjoy your surrealism! See my latest....

unable to pinpoint why this has such a strong effect, but it does. this is simply beautiful (and nice wordplay in there, too!)