For all the fragile panes of glass.


Fragile


You are fragile
Like a pane of glass
And so am i
And together we will shatter
And as the pieces fall to the ground
They will sing
But the song will not be sad
For the moment we had
Was worth waiting
An eter---nity for.


© Rik - 08/09/2006





Poetry by Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-09-08 at 18:02

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Bob
This is nice, a transparent message about the fragility or frailty of living. But I got a bit stuck though with all the "And" standing on top of each other :-)
2006-10-12


Amanda K
Well i guess after reading it, i will welcome death with open arms.
2006-09-09


sania
sooo vivid n sooo beautiful
i think i have joined your fanclub!
2006-09-09


Saga
Beautiful dedication with a somewhat happy ending!!
2006-09-09


Kathy Lockhart
Poignant and vivid! This says so much about who we are as people. kathy
2006-09-09


Mr.Mist
...so.....fragile...

-mr.m
2006-09-08



Certain moments can be worthy anything. Absolutely anything...
This is a very beautiful text, and so true!
2006-09-08


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Rik a nice poem full of your lovly images of what we were regards mike
2006-09-08