My shadow and I

My shadow and I

At life's crossroad

My shadow and I
still wander

on the nobility street;

- My shadow
My faithful follower

Even when the sun
shines down on me

You always stand by me,
you represent my dark side.

As a reminder of who I am
and what I can become. ...

If I change my direction
and walk on the Hedonism street

I will then become
the shadow of myself. ..



Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-09-19 at 00:08

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Sandy Hiss
I agree, this poem has a haunting, eerie quality to it.
2006-09-19


Malin Johansson
A great poem here!! Enjoyed reading it...
the shadow the faithfull follower.. nice!!!
hugs from Göteborg
2006-09-19


Saga
There are two sides of every coin. You've depicted this perfectly.
2006-09-19


Kathy Lockhart
This is awesome! I love the duality! Yes, we all have that shadow side and it does follow us. That last line set this as bookmarked and in my Favs! xx kathy
2006-09-19


Phyllis J. Rhodes
Using few words, you've relayed a mesmerizing story. As I read the last lines chills actually ran over my arms. This was literally awe inspiring and deserves a wide audience and much discussion.
2006-09-19


wee2souls
a strong poem
how you write so!!!
amazingly gifted writer
you are!!!!!!!!!
hugs to you
cindy:)
2006-09-19


keith nunes
well written and a great scene you've conjured with your words!
2006-09-19


Cr4Ky
this is haunting!

A very good image.. a little scary to think about though.. but such a strong text!

Bravo!
2006-09-19


Dan Cederholm
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A very good and well written poem here!!!

And for thrue, we don't want to be

shadows . . . When we can live in the light

Regards and hugs Dan

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2006-09-19