222. All the 'Offs' for lastromantichero's Off challenge



Don't remind me of the corpses,
all the lost ones, all the accusations,
all the failures, all that got away,
all the exploded dreams, the cruelties and massacres,
all the deceivers and the frauds,
the vanished hopes, the deaths, the burials...
Let me rest in peace for all the living dead
that never can stop torturing you
by being constantly dug up as agony reminders
whenever they get the slightest chance.
A divorce is worse than any marriage,
for a marriage can be ended by divorce,
but a divorce will ever haunt you,
hunt you down and keep you on the rack forever.




Poetry by Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-09-26 at 11:41

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BlueyedSoul
Insightful approach to this challenge. Excellent.

~Blue
2006-09-27


Rob Graber
Strikingly original conclusion!
2006-09-26


Zoya Zaidi
A very, very hautingly poignant pievce...
Dear Critian,this shows your insight into the human feelings...
Bravo!
*Bookmarked*
Love,
Zoya
2006-09-26


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Christian this ver poignant and powerful text is an interesting take on the theme and i thank you for taking part rgds mike
2006-09-26