In a moment of no hope.


Towards the tower

Nothing left to gain, though
I ask for more, and
then some, you see -
I feel the energy
rising below, in cold
certainty, now -
running towards
the tower
but, now -
just a
big

black

hole




Poetry by J. E.
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Written on 2006-09-28 at 01:07

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Kathy Lockhart
dark and brilliant at the same time
2006-10-02


Jessica Rexroat
Great images and feel
There is a series of books by Stephen King
called The Dark Tower Series, this poems immediately brought those stories to mind - which is good, VERY good
2006-10-01


Arti
Very vivid, powerful write.. Welcome to the bay!
2006-09-28


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey man a very good description of depression and so powerful welcome to the bat rgds mike
2006-09-28



A good expression of this dark state of mind.
Welcome on the bay!
2006-09-28


Veld Cooper
An excellent write, JE. Very well done!
2006-09-28


Judy T Lloyd
I can see the events of 911 coming out in this piece. Very graphic and telling.
2006-09-28