It frustrates me to see poeple around me struggle so hard for success that they, in the end, drive themselves onto the wall, and (at the worst) withers away. Don't be too hard on yourselves.
A short and simple write.


In the end

They say
that failure
is not an option

But it is

For in the
great game
we all lose

In the end




Poetry by J. E.
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Written on 2006-10-02 at 16:31

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
You have said so much with so few words.

A great write.

liz
2006-10-19


Veld Cooper
Very thought-provoking, and there are definitely circumstances in life where you are doomed to fail before you even start.
Veld
2006-10-03


Kathy Lockhart
deeply thought-provoking text here. I will ponder it...
Isn't that a mark of good writing? I think it is. : ) kathy
2006-10-02


Love Knight
It depends what stragety we use in the game. But yes, we will all lose. But different people lose with different prides.
2006-10-02