Commentally Ill
well this is bright and chirpy, the whole thing smacks of delight :)

ok, not really, what does a smartass say to this? not much. another try:

for a second attempt, it looks more like a third? (no, even as i type it i know that sounds shitty.) hell with it then, i'll have to go the serious route:

i do so very like it... which has a lot to do with why i'm speechless ;) impressive, my talented friend....

:)
2005-09-25

blackestdaze
i can't write one of these for the life of me and have it come out decent. you however, seem like a cat stretching its body into a natural shape - form. and you say you are not a poet! could've fooled me, poetess, for indeed that is what you are :)
2005-09-24

epohonci
(gives you a hell-yeah) and a 5 ;)
2005-09-24

chasingtheday
smiling - you should be proud, i know you have wanted to have a go at the forms for a long time now, i am glad i could persuade you to do so :)
2005-09-24