i havent fully understood what a haiku is. forgive me.


fade like a smile

Come over slowly

it's a life of two

i don't wanna fade like a smile.



Haiku by Angel_in_disguise
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Written on 2006-10-08 at 23:05

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Kathy Lockhart
this is beautiful! It reveals so much emotion in these very few lines. Each line is important and stands alone yet is supported by the others. Well Done!
2006-10-09


keith nunes
wonderful work - it hums!
2006-10-08


Coolaaron88
Yes smiles do fade but they always come back even stronger. I liked it, good job. Oh and a haiku is a 3 line stanza with a 5,7,5 syllable pattern.

If you wanted to know : )

~Aaron Rowe
2006-10-08