hey, i'm back. Merry Christmas everyone! Feliz Navidad

"Happy Christmas, Angel"

She smiled and got away
the streets are empty but your presence
still lies there, among the stars
i hear a little voice over the balcony
"Happy Christmas, angel"
She cries. Her eyes' sky pours bitter rain.

Poetry by Angel_in_disguise
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Written on 2006-12-22 at 23:02

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Enjoying your short poems. Keep it up

lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there Angel in D

this is a very powerful poem and its good to see you back
I too liked the last line because i have also used the analogy of what I called acid rain to denote a deeply depressed state of

well done and welcome back rgds mike