Obstacle of Fundamental Love

Obstacles must be surmounted
Perfection in this world is taunted
But everyone seems to be judgmental
Find love sweet fundamental

Let not your heart be troubled
Else pain be doubled
Let love have devotion
Maybe it is time to get in motion

Who should take the heat for hurt?
It is sweet not to be on the alert
Love defeats the pain
Over the hill, there is much to gain




Poetry by Jason Matthews
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Written on 2005-09-29 at 13:35

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
it's an ok poem, though the rhyme seems a little forced here.

love, it has many faces, not all of them pleasnt.
2005-09-29


Bowjonozz
This I really liked!
Filled me with hope. A great poem!
2005-09-29