eyes conceal so much. they are as deep as the sea and as high as the tide...........


EYES ARE SEAS

EYES ARE THE SEAS
IN WHICH DREAMS RISE
LIKE TIDES

EYES ARE THE SEAS
IN WHICH THOUGHTS SWIM
LIKE FISH

EYES ARE THE SEAS
IN WHICH HARD WORK
FORMS PEARLS

EYES ARE THE SEAS
IN WHICH EMOTIONS
FLOW LIKE BOATS

EYES ARE THE SEAS
IN WHICH HOPES
LIKE MERMAIDS, SIT
BEAUTIFYING THE MIND.





Poetry by sania
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Written on 2006-10-19 at 18:00

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munir mezyed
I like the way u try to define the eyes ...people say eyes are the mirror of the mind ....But what makes ur poem very special is that u use images ...like

EYES ARE THE SEAS
IN WHICH DREAMS RISE
LIKE TIDES

And so on to the rest of the poem....

good luck
Munir Mezyed / Endymion
2007-01-12


Bella_Laluna
Beautiful poem=)


Love Laluna
2006-10-30


Rob Graber
Written with a good ear; I like it!
2006-10-20