Something I wrote yesterday because I've been annoyed with some people to no end. Some title ideas are all I'm asking for help on.


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How I loathe your annoyance,
The way you look,
And the way you talk,
You speak pointless words and sentences,
Things that no one cares about,
Come from your ugly voice,
As you talk some more,
My temper drops lower and lower,
And my anger growing,
Not being able to stand your presence,
The bell rings,
I get up as fast as I can,
It was another day,
I still can't stand you,
Even the thought,
Gets to me,
One day you will push me,
Maybe just a little too far,
And will leave you filled with regret



Poetry by Brenna
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Written on 2005-10-01 at 15:35

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John Ashleigh
Lovely poem, this ballad is so open to us that I can just picture you in that state of mind again and again.

The title: Sending Contrition
2005-10-01


Commentally Ill
the things we loathe in others... are usually the same things we loathe within ourselves.

but also i pictured teachers droning on and on in a bored voice... fun fun.

saved by the bell!

:)
2005-10-01


Ray
I have read some of your other poems and you write what is in your mind at the time. In other words you write when inspired. I hope you get thru all of what you are going thru. Keep writing what you really feel...God Bless...
2005-10-01