Another write...so tell me what you think. I know in the middle of the poem where I have something about cold and bitterness I already know that's wrong I just want to see what else there might be ok? so yea....
It's the most wonderful time of the year,
But in her life it wasn't always,
At one time winter wasn't so wonderful,
The snow was once like her tears,
And would fall constantly,
The cold air was like her heart,
It always felt cold and bitterness,
Once upon a winter,
The sun barely seemed to shine,
Snow always seemed to be slush,
Like her days she lived through,
And like her feelings,
They were like slush,
That seemed to be melting away
Poetry by Brenna
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Written on 2005-12-06 at 12:29
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Once Upon a Winter
Some say,It's the most wonderful time of the year,
But in her life it wasn't always,
At one time winter wasn't so wonderful,
The snow was once like her tears,
And would fall constantly,
The cold air was like her heart,
It always felt cold and bitterness,
Once upon a winter,
The sun barely seemed to shine,
Snow always seemed to be slush,
Like her days she lived through,
And like her feelings,
They were like slush,
That seemed to be melting away
Poetry by Brenna
Read 735 times
Written on 2005-12-06 at 12:29
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