oh...sad love story ....

Death's smile

Counting down the days
till you bring spring in my heart
till summer's end marks my life
till leaves turn gold and blue
till you step out this house
and leave me behind
i know i should stop you
but i just don't have the strength
to face the death's smile

Poetry by Angel_in_disguise
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Written on 2006-10-29 at 11:36

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Mukul Dahal
What a light but poignant piece. Angel, I loved your writing.

You've joined those words together in perfect harmony... wonderful!


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
wow powerfu land deep this is a succintly poignant cry well done on the bravery but dont be sad too long rgds mike