still feeling kinda down... just expressing my feelings through writing.. i hope things get better soon


I cry out for help
Yet no reply I hear
Save for the lone voice
Echoing in my ear

Tears which are shed here
Do not have meaning
Useless in this place
That's devoid of feeling

No hands to hold me
No encouraging word
My life is fading
My world becoming blurred

As I fade to black
I look up to the sky
I open my mouth
And mutter one word


Poetry by Michael G
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Written on 2006-10-30 at 23:40

Tags Alone  Darkness 

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I hope thing get better fot you soon! I have been really down and points and writing does seem to help.
Great write, very deep.

Amanda K
i lived it and felt so sometimes in my life. we need some2 close i guess or dear to share those bad negative feelings. well-done.